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He is my mental lover
sitting across from me on the table
the perfect gentleman
stimulating my mind
with his talks of
politics and society
religion
abstract thoughts
about human nature
tickling my senses with
his command of
movies and music
arts and children
trees and the full moon
making me crave and swoon
internally
over his conversation
about passion
he does not even touch me
except perhaps
for the occasional
gallant gesture
making me feel like
I’m a prize for princes
while he undresses me with his eyes
penetrating me with his gaze
impaling me through the heart
his voice and laughter
much like
gentle caresses
my pores are almost
ready to ooze out honey
and brilliance
he twirls me around
in a dance of thoughts
and makes me dizzy
just sitting here wondering
what he’s really thinking
he picks up my heart
like plucking a delicate orchid
opening my petals
one by one
as I reveal myself to his
tactfully probing
questions
like he really wants to know me
and his sincere and precise
compliments
always perfectly timed
make me feel like
he is slowly entering my soul
hitting that spot
making me quiver
and blush
in anticipation
this man is a pro
on mind sex
man, does he work it
and does he work me
until I am sweaty and wet
and ready and willing
for the next step
.
wow!
Girl this Poem Rocks!…I am standing and clapping profusely….am telling you, you are good at what you do am loving this! you are no novice.
Iris, simply amazing…I love this one!!!
“making me feel like I am a prize for princes…”
“as I reveal myself to his tactfully probing questions like he really wants to know me”
yep I am feeling this!
Whoa! Simply Amazing…
Thank you so much, for reading and for appreciating. I’m glad you liked it. Half of me thinks I overdid it, the other half thinks it’s lacking something major. LOL.
I know what you mean Iris…I have trouble finding the right balance too…but this was PERFECT!
ooohhh
this still about the same guy?
xx
@glitteringsoot: …
i think tht’s a yes
hehehe
dis is amorously xpressed-wit sensational strings…powerful,i luv dis.
My word…that’s some serious sexin for the brain…i love the open endin…like as if it’s open for you to take it to the next step after her…wonderful
This is a great write and flow is beautiful . I was captured into it. thanks for sharing.
GREAT FLOW AND RHYTHM
whoa…I like that position!!!!!! sexy poetry
“while he undresses me with his eyes
penetrating me with his gaze
impaling me through the heart
his voice and laughter
much like
gentle caresses
my pores are almost
ready to ooze out honey
and brilliance ”
Love it love it…hmmmm
A mental 69 of the mind…Awesome scribe….Ms. IRIS
Gene
wow thanks for the responses to my protege’s piece..thank you all one great love for you all.
my friend is such a beautiful write she is on point..cali-isms
the phrase “mental 69″ kicks ass, Gene. haha!
and everybody: i blush with all the good vibes i’m getting. mr sanders has literally taken me from the A to Zs of writing what’s on my heart and mind while using the language of the flesh. being exposed to his poetry just expanded my world as an artist, and i feel like a more mature woman.
This of what you speak sister is the foreplay to the physical. I love the insertion of the wordplay: impale,penetrate,ooze! Girl you take us right there like voyeurs watching a xxx. Yes Cali_ism keep encouraging this talent. Keep it flowing infinite!
“and his sincere and precise
compliments
always perfectly timed
make me feel like
he is slowly entering my soul”
…if this don’t take you there…!!!
Ripe with fever and sensuality…NICELY DELIVERED
awesome, that is all i can say breathtaking
Once again you have done it MsIris. Check out another favorite of mine from Erykah Badu (Kiss me on my neck). She speaks of “watering the flowers of my mind”. You are gifted among women. Thanks for sharing. (snap, snap, snap…) lol
Excellent Iris. My favorite line is ‘he twirls me around in a dance of the mind, making me dizzy.’ Great!
NICE PIECE!
“hitting that spot
making me quiver
and blush
in anticipation”
you go girl, this is steamyyyy I like a lot
Spectacular. I didn’t plan on featuring the same poet twice, but I think with this poem I will have to make an exception. I have scheduled this poem for June 7th 2011. Thanks again for allowing my to showcase your work.